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Devastate Lasting replied to the topic Short Story Contest Critique in the forum Critiques 7 years ago

@morreafirebird Here’s the newest version… Thank you so much for your help! Please don’t feel like you have to look it over again if you don’t want to… you’ve done a lot already 🙂 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nQYPvy3fsQMsmyzVu9nDXrQGh2IKylfR/view?usp=sharing