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  • Devastate Lasting replied to the topic November Critique Piece: Psychotic in the forum Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago

    @warrenluther04 Thank you for your feedback! I actually based ‘The Game’ after this one Tumblr post I saw on Pinterest…so it might have been the game that you played.

    -This was actually when I first found a writing style and voice that I liked. I’m glad you liked it.

    -Yeah, I tend to over describe characters so when I write short stories I tend to underdescribe them. In case you’re wondering Eleven has burnt-sienna hair and clear eyes that are brown, I think.

    -Thank you. I tend to go with whatever would fit the scene.

    -Thank you!

    Thanks for taking the time to review. I’m glad you liked it!

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