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  • Coralie replied to the topic Willow Wood Excerpt in the forum Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago

    @scribbles and @rolena-hatfield

    Um, so okay here is a link to the full The Little Fairy. I also put some of the Untitled Mermaid (starts on pg. 15; should be marked in the outline to easily jump down.) draft at the bottom. Please feel free to read as much or as little as you like.

    These are both basically first drafts. I know the ending of The Little Fairy is really abrupt and unsatisfying, but the whole story was a bit of a prequel for Willow and Maya’s story. Even then, some of the scenes are still really rough, especially Keenan’s intro scene. *shakes head and pulls out hair* This whole cast of characters has got me all turned around. I’ve had Mira and Sabi’s voices in my head for a year and now Willow and Maya demand to be heard!

    As for the Untitled Mermaid, well, it’s just all a mess, but I’m having fun with it and making more progress, so…yeah. XD

    Sorry, I’m kind of nervous to share this I guess. Well, here goes!

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