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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Prologue: The Ember Dies in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Physical appearances are a trouble spot…I always feel stupid with that, so I don’t generally do it (which is a problem). And just description in general lol I tried it in a scene once and it felt super awkward and didn’t read very well.












