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@brookewolf  I personally love critiquing. I don’t know how good I’ll be, but if you’re willing, I’d love to give it a shot, it sounds like a great story.

One think you mentioned, I might be careful calling female soldiery Biblicaly wrong. It’s certainly not part of a woman’s role, it isn’t something we were made to do, especially when it comes to competing with men, I think we shouldn’t do it. But I’m not sure the Bible every teaches that it’s morally wrong for a woman to be in active combat. Just a thought…maybe that is what you were saying and I misunderstood, and I don’t want to appear nit-picky.

Anyhow, looking forward to reading your work. 🙂