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Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic FIRST SE FICTION STORY: RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
I love my character’s lines. They’re so accurate. 😜
Pennsylvania’s eyes widened. “Hey, how many times do I have to tell you that this is an action—”
“Let it go. I’ll edit it out later.” Storm rolled her eyes as Edna glared at him for his impudence.
Pennsylvania fell on his knees and covered his face. “Why? Why must two innocent, guiltless—”
“That’s redundant.” Storm crossed her arms.












