Cassandra Blenkin

They waited for several minutes in silence before the governor was completely gone.
Without a word Ivaylo started down the hall leading to the king. He reached the corner and halted, peering cautiously around it. Several security cameras were active and scanning the room. Ivaylo turned to the men.

“On my mark, fire at the cameras. Gryph, you g…[Read more]

The men crouched behind a small table and in a doorway.

The governor left the room and walked down the corridor.

Bo’ watched from his position, taking in every detail about the man.

“The Jedi are here, Count Dooku! In the capital!” Anxiety and irritation filled the man’s voice. “You promised me that the droids would keep them away!”

“And they will, Lord Ufflu’arn. I am sending reinforcements as we speak.” The deep, intense voice of Count Dooku spoke, slightly distorted by the holo-call. Gryphon and Bo’ exchanged looks,…[Read more]

(Okiiii)

they silently slinked through the halls. Bo’ marveled at the grandeur of the castle.

Ivaylo paused by a doorway and motioned for the clones to wait.

Voices were heard from the room.

@Claire-h

Oh, and I forgot to mention that I do read a lot of books written in the 1800s and early 1900s, and that’s kind of become my style. 🙂 I don’t know if it’s annoying to most modern day readers, but I was hoping since the book was set in that historical era, that people’d be okay with it.

Yeah, they knew the Separatists were invading, but now they find out that the king’s head governor betrayed the king and is working with the Separatists.

@claire-h WOW, thanks so much! This was super helpful.

I think one of my problems was that the Frys where so entertaining that I didn’t want to make light of the guy being shot and missing, and I overcompensated on the melodrama, whoops. I toned them both down a little now. I do want the story to be somewhat realistic, although I do have a fairly…[Read more]

(Is this where the men overhear some traitor talking about something? Forgot exactly what we planned lol)

Ivaylo scaled the last several rungs of the escape hatch and waited in silence at the top. He flung the hatch open and leapt out, hands near his weapons. He scanned the light-grey stone room.

“It’s clear,” He said to Bo’ and Gryphon. His two companions jumped out.

Gryphon moved to one of the large windows.

“Looks like our distraction is workin…[Read more]

lol I can totally understand that XD

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(Hmm)

Bo’ and Ivaylo continued on in the underground system.

they soon found Gryphon waiting for them near an closed door above his head.

Bo’ gave the Trooper a small smile as they reached him.

Ivaylo nodded, “this should be it.”

The three then began their assent into the castle.

Solstice’s hand drifted toward her lightsaber hilt. Something was coming, something bad… the sense of foreboding grew and spread throughout her body before a sudden explosion of warning shot through her mind.

“Everyone down!” Solstice screamed just as laser fire erupted from the trees.

Five round metal contraptions dropped from the treetop…[Read more]

(I think Jak and Zak were with Zeinli’s group, but XD I guess it doesn’t matter :P)

Will kept a tight hold on the vines that kept the wolf guy captive. Every once in a while the guy would give a low growl, and Will had to shrug away a chill going down his spine.

Noaa and Cresh stuck close together, guns at the ready. Cresh still eyed Jaina…[Read more]

Solstice fidgeted nervously with one of her braids. She bit her lip and motioned Jak and Zak over.
“I want you to get up in a tree and survey the area every few minutes,” she told them. The inseparable pair nodded, and Jak quickly scaled a tree and scanned the group’s surroundings.

“What was that all about?” Jaina asked. Solstice shrugged.…[Read more]

@katie02

Thank you for sharing your work! I know it takes a lot of courage sometimes. 🙂 I really enjoyed this snippet! Great job with the characters …and the mysterious happenings. Mr. and Mrs. Bill Fry are so entertaining. XD So here are the few thoughts I had:

First off, this story reads like it was written in the 1800s. Have you read a lot…[Read more]

Sry I took so long

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Jaina and her crew pressed on, even with a prisoner in tow.

Steady would glance back at the wolf guy every once in a while, distrust in his eyes, and waryness on his face underneath his helmet.

Reel stood at the ready with his gun poised, looking forward to the destruction of more droids.

(Sry it’s very anticlimactic XD)

With a wild cry Prince Akee leapt forward and tackled the head enemy wolf-person.
“You traitors!” He cried. Akee and the leader fell to the ground, wrestling savagely.

Zeinli and Goane moved forward and brandished their lightsabers at the wolf-people. The rebels hesitated and crouched down at the slight of the intimidating weapons.

Rookie gri…[Read more]

Goane and his group jumped over the wall and landed in the midst of a sea of battledroids.

He ignited his saber, gripping it in between his fingers in his unusual way. His team immediately thinned out the droids with the help of a flank of clones and wolf people coming from the other side of the streets.

Then bombs went off, coming from nowhere.…[Read more]