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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria 😉 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Okay!
Thanks! I’ll try to post chapter four today!
Okay, I’ll try to find those…
Yeah…I’ll try to change their reactions to more of unbelieving.
It’s strange that the Ninjanarians call their world Ninjanaria, since we creatively call our world ”The World”…Not exactly sure what that means…could you elaborate?
Something that seemed somewhat unrealistic to me, is the depiction of boys crying.Yeah…your right! I should change that lol!!
Thanks for the critique!! 🙂
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