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Chena heard the clay jar mama, and papa had given her last Purim smash.  This was extremely confusing I had to reread it like three times before I figured it out lol! More punctuation girl, more punctuation! XD 

There were a few parts that might have had better punctuation, but for the most part the punctuation was good! I can see how much it improved from the first version! Good job, you put a lot of emotion into it!! Can’t wait to read more, if you post chapters make sure to tag me!! 

It reminded me of a Rosemary Sutcliffe book!