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  • Bronte Clarke / Tara Belle replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 9 months ago

    @rose-colored-fancy

    I had a feeling Isa was older than Faye. Sometimes birth order doesn’t need to be specifically introduced (or at least not all at once). And I wasn’t sure what had been introduced in an earlier scene (if Isa is in the previous scene, then it all makes sense).

    So Faye is right in the middle, but she’s very shy, especially at the start of the book, so I think that’s why she reads as older. And yes, she does tend to disappear, especially amongst her more extroverted siblings *Cough* Juni *cough* XD

    Ah ~ nice. Starting to get that at the end when she goes off to check their cow.

     

    XD

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