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Arindown (Gracie) replied to the topic Character description critiques/game in the forum Characters 5 years ago
This is the introduction I give for my MC, Thane, from the POV of Mr. Burncut, a tavern owner.😁 I’ll probably revamp it in the future, but here it is…
As Mr. Burncut crossed the room, someone caught his eye. A figure was sitting alone in the far corner, head lowered, and dirty leather boots sticking out from underneath a thick dark cloak. Something about the way the traveler’s black eyes glinted as he watched the room made Mr. Burncut uncomfortable.












