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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
(Though I actually like the word ‘crowing’ there, as a reference to the pridefulness we too often indulge.)
That’s a good thought! I experimented with different ways to give it that effect, but eventually decided to leave it the way it was. Thank you for the idea and for taking the time to read my poem!
@cassie-hartfinh Thank you, Cassie! I love that rainbow!










