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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic A Street Team? Is that what they're called? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@wordsmith Yeah, I call myself an extroverted introvert. I can pass for extroverted if I try hard enough. 😛
A plotter? I suppose I would consider myself a plotter. I like weaving conspiracies and intrigue into my books to keep the readers on their toes. 😉
Oh yeah! I remember reading that article! Your application of that concept is intriguing. Now that I think about it, male writers are generally better at describing fighting/action scenes. That is something I always notice about their work.
You’re definitely right about the “color” aspect. I like to focus on what the character is feeling/experiencing as a way of connecting the readers to her.
Something I noticed recently was that I find it easier to write in first person than third because it’s a more familiar point of view. What about you? Do you find it easier to write one POV over another?
And if you’d like to point out those grammar errors, I’d love to hear them.
I’m so sorry, I mistyped. They’re more like typos. *sheepish smile* Here is what I noticed:
Somehow the training of these solider paid off
“Soldiers”
Wood threw splinters and cobbles shattered shafts as Keith ducked behind and building a pressed his back against another side, breathing in and out deeply.Â
“as Keith ducked behind a building and” (Just as a side note, I really like the imagery in this sentence. I never would have thought of wood throwing splinters and cobbles shattering shafts. *double thumbs up*)












