Ariella Newheart posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago
@elisha-starquill @april-j-rhys Hello! I’m posting this to let you know that I’ve finished editing the first book of the Chronicles of Origin, Ashen Blaze. If either of you are able to beta-read, please let me know and I’ll send you a link to the doc. 😀
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That’s great news! Send me the link! 😀
Here you go, @elisha-starquill ! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lzSmMZq02D1qUEzI9vGK8YnZ8InSIs0RkbVCz58g0dA/edit?usp=sharing
YES!. *fistpumps* Thank you so much for letting me know, Ariella! So, I have already promised I’d do two other stories first. *wince* BUT they are short. Ish. So, I WILL get back to you on this asap. 😉
@april-j-rhys All right, thanks! 🙂
ACK! *gasps* I’m finally back here and I’m gonna read the first chapter tonight! 😀 #solookingforwardtothis Do you have any major questions or anything you’d like me to especially look out for while reading? Apologies again for the delay. :]
*gasps* I just read the prologue and chapter 1. O-O *is hooked* I have to run for tonight, but I’ll be back. 😉
@april-j-rhys Thank you so much for reading! I’d love to hear your general thoughts on the story, characters, and the theme, if you can pick it out. 🙂
Sure, definitely! 😀 I’m still only on the third chapter though–ran into some scheduling turbulence so to speak. Can’t wait to read more though. I left several comments on the doc…did those come through?
@april-j-rhys Yes, those comments did come through! Thank you so much! I haven’t gotten around to replying to them, but I did read them.