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Archer360 replied to the topic Dark Father in the forum Critiques 8 years ago
@rolena-hatfield Yay! No problem! 😉
Yes. Just yes, yes, yes. You have no idea how you just tied a really cool plot element together. I might just do it. 😀 *happydance* #spoilers lol.
I was thinking that if that did happen, it would be sooo cool! Especially if you guided the readers to think that something else happened to the note. Haha, I am always game for spoilers! 😛
I am the same way! But thank goodness that is what editing and revising stage is for 😉
The other thing I noticed was that you mentioned E’s mother very briefly twice. To me it sound like she’s sick? or something? Is that why Evlynn has to go the Light Giving to stand in the family’s place? If that is not the case, I am just curious of why she is mentioned those few brief times. 🙂












