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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@christlover Um.. Idk? Lol.. I recently watched the first Lord of The Rings movie, and liked it. And I like Princess Bride, The Greatest Showman, and some others I can’t remember… I guess there’s not a particular genre, just so long as I like the plot and all.
Normally I’m a shy person, so I usually try to blend in, but what I kinda wanna do is dress up as like a gypsy or fortune-teller or whatever, with lots of colorful clothing and jewelry and makeup. But I can’t think of a movie with a character like that. A friend is going as a book character, so I guess I could do that.
And I guess I missed your last piece lol. There were a few inconsistencies in Lucas’ character, but that’s totally fine. He’s a deeply fleshed out character and I wouldn’t expect somebody besides myself (no offense tho 😛 ) to get him perfect. So here’s what I noticed: You noted the tattoo on his left arm, which is fine, but he’s gonna be wearing long sleeves, so it won’t be visible unless he rolls them up. Maybe it would show a little from under the cuff though. But not the whole thing. Also, he’s left-handed. And you used words like “menacing” and “harsh” to describe how he sounded when he was talking to them, but that’s not exactly how he’d sound. He’d probably keep his tone pretty friendly and calm, but it’d have an unmistakable hardness to it, that tells you: “this guy sounds friendly, and probably is, but I need to be careful what I do and say or it’ll get ugly.” And the last thing would be that Lucas wouldn’t back down that quickly (in the scene with Thesues and Caedon protecting Runawin). He’d lower his dagger, but his protectiveness of Caedon would make him super wary of Runawin, especially after she talked.
But you did well with the rest! I love Thesues’ character more and more with each piece!
@elisha-starquill Aah… Yeah, that would explain her attitude XD
Thanks!! I love writing him and everything. And interacting with all of y’all’s characters has been really good for me so far, as far as developing his character goes.
I wish I had time to write something, cause I have an idea that I’m liking, but I really need to work on a couple WIPs. Like, REALLY need to. 😛 So I’m gonna leave this next piece to y’all and I’ll come back later and write more with Lucas. Savvy? 😀










