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  • anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic Summary of a WIP in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago

    @ariella-newheart Thanks! It may be, I don’t remember. I’ve posted about a few of my WIPs.

    @taylorclogston Ah, yes. I’ve heard of elevator pitches before. That’s a very nice one with Star Wars and Jaws lol. I’ll check out the blog when I have a chance.

    “I think the blurb should focus on the dramatic question the protagonist faces, and throw out bits like the name of the province and his specific age. Why does he specfically want to put a new king in power, how will he do it, and what is at stake if he fails? You ask “will he fail?” Without telling us what that means or why we care.”            I see. That makes sense. I’ll see what I can whip up. Thanks to the both of you for putting up with all us newbies lol. My amazing friend and mentor, Mrs. Karen, would shake her head at me if I apologize to her one more time for being a “nuisance,” but the thing is, I don’t take favors easily. My mom doesn’t, either, so maybe it runs in my blood, but I’ve never been good with accepting complements, favors, or the fact that all the people I’ve met so far as far as writing goes don’t think of me as a bother, even with all my questions. But anyways, thanks again, and I’ll see what I can do with y’all’s suggestions and comments. 😀

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