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Hi fellow writers,

So…I’ve finished writing my first kids’ short story (the age range is 8+), and I would love for some people to beta read it for me if you want to xD

The story is historical fiction, and is about a young boy who is given a poppy seed for his birthday. A couple years later, WWI starts, and he enlists underage. The story journeys through his experiences in both WWI and WWII, and weaves the theme of a poppy throughout the book, as he leaves a poppy seed in every blood-stained battlefield that he fights on, as a tribute to his fallen comrades.

Oh, yeah…and it’s called The Poppy btw 😉

The main things I would appreciate getting feedback on would be the flow of the story, theme, if the end is easy to understand, and the main character.

Please feel free to give any other suggestions 🙂

Here’s the link to it…you will have to ask for access tho, btw.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IKH2XEx16mvUQ4z_I8W4tm-eSsyKEmBxTAKe_Uy02dU/edit