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Good point, but let’s say a character gave another character a dry look, how would you word that?

… hmm.

You have a point.

Maybe something like this? “The stare she gave him was as dry as a desert.”

I’m not sure I can be too helpful in this area, I apologize. 😅

 

I agree. I suppose it’s just I have a hard time describing people’s faces in words–even if I’m looking at a picture or real life person.

Well, we’re all skilled and inexperienced in different things — I know I struggle with place descriptions. 😅

Oh, and btw, that was an excellent description.

Thank you! 😊

 

Same here–on both counts. xD

#Lazywritersforthewin

 

I think descriptions such as those are usually the best–though I do use paces quite often.

Hm, I’ve never thought to use “paces” before … thanks! 😁

 

Alrighty, so you do use it some for third person, but never for first person–for obvious reasons.

Yep, pretty much.