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  • Jane Maree replied to the topic Random Short Story (If you have the time..) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago

    @professorsjb

    I’ve gone through ‘The Spell’ and woooow that was…really interesting. Not at all like I thought it was going to be, but definitely super interesting. I really liked it! Good job. 😀

    The main thing to note was that there was quite a lot of passive voice throughout the story. (But that’s also this week’s activity/topic so that might help you a bit too. 😉 )

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