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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
I can’t decide whether I loved that or hated it. Thoughts, my friends?
Well, it audibly made me go “Aww, that’s so cute…” so that’s a yes from me XD
Okayyy I’m back and now I’m going to write an uber sentimental scene cuz besides existential crises and blood, those are me favorites! XD
Oh, absolutely! My other favorites are when you reread a scene and it feels like being punched in the gut seven consecutive times. That always makes me ‘happy’ XD
Lol it’s fine. Gives Niarok some room to grow and gives me some fun to play with his character… XD I’m curious how he’s going to react…
I actually love how he’s reacting, he’s just too sweet.
Wait really? Like seriously? XD I had no idea… What did I do??? I’m legit clueless over here…
Totally!! You write Aydin better than I do and add extra depth and blend it with Niarok’s perspective it’s just *chef’s kiss*!!! Just Niarok as a character is so facinating because he has this really dark past and instead of it making him hard like it did with Yila, he stayed so kind and is so empathetic to everyone.
I love him, he has my heart 🥰
Also fair warning I’m going to post twice now because I want Niarok but Yila needs screen time too. Leytera is just quietly sitting around watching all the action and wondering if she should run or give someone a hug or cry or something else… Idk what to do with her right now! XD
We all have that character XD
Also, after we finish with the moral compass thing (cuz I need to know how Leytera’s going to react), I’m probably going to pull her out as I have another character who really needs development and the other castle isn’t really working for her.
Ooh, is that the one in the villain’s castle? That castle is kind of hibernating, everyone is too busy. That sounds awesome!
I’m planning to drop Liorah in at the same time, just for a little while to watch the ✨chaos✨. And just for the sass that’s Aydin and Liorah together. Man, they’re the worst I love it.
So, @calidris , maybe you want to see if you can get Saskia in at about the same time so we can see the glorious disaster that is Saskia-Basil-Liorah? (Pretty pretty please I’m begging you, my imagination has run off with that dynamic and I really need to see it)
I’ll write Aydin later. I’m curious to see what Aydin is going to do now his secrets are all uncomfortably public…
This is going to get dark again, let’s goooo!!












