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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 1 month ago
All i will say is Liorah sounds fascinating! I love the internal conflict she is struggling with. I would definitely love to read more about her in your WIP when it gets published
Aww, thank you! And “when it gets published” thanks for the vote of confidence XD I initially made up my mind that I wouldn’t be publishing but I’ve been rethinking it because I figured out that the only reason I wouldn’t publish was that I’m scared.
A. it isn’t marketable so it probably won’t be published traditionally (and getting a book deal is a big commitment I’m not ready for) and b. if I invest all that effort, money, and time into self-publication it’ll languish somewhere and get no readers XD Or I’ll be super embarrassed at it in a few years. XD
So, I’m doing some more research and praying about that one š Anyway, I need to focus on actually writing the books first XD
Thats the dream isnāt it Ā I actually think anime adaptations are the best bet when it comes to adaptations. Live action always usually messes up the stories (except the hunger games)Ā Ā Plus I always draw my characters in the anime style because it just feels right, so I canāt imagine it any other way lol. Though I know the anime style isnāt for everyone, so any 2D animation in general is waayy better than live action. You can do things with animation that you canāt achieve with live action. I heard the wingfeather saga is getting an animated adaptation. So if i had to pick, I would ask for animated adaptation of my series, preferably anime
That’s definitely true and so cool! Actually, even though I adore the Hunger Games books, I’ve never seen the movies. (I’m too squeamish, that’s not happening XD)
Honestly… If I had to pick… A live-action would be awesome if the casting was perfect and it’d need a pretty massive budget *glances at all the epic battle scenes* XD
You know what would be awesome?! A 2d animation in the old Disney style, especially how they did Atlantis. That would be the most epic thing!! *Briefly considers doing a clip myself then remembers I have the animation skills of an educated potato XD*
Its so cool when you realise things like that while youāre writing the story down. Its so rewarding once you learn more about your characters. Personally i find it hard to create internal conflict and struggles for my characters because i end up forgetting about them when i write the chapters. Its really annoying haha
OOh, yes! I always either have to write it down or think obsessively about it for about five minutes, then I usually remember XD And I have to reread and edit stuff a lot. When I read the earlier draft I’m like “No. Nope, these aren’t my characters, I don’t know these people.”
Yes youād wonder ā buut it wonāt be a good story then if theyāre happy out and joyful if you get me. Happy endings are so much more rewarding once your characters have overcome their truama and obstacles. I am planning a very happy ending for Lorcan and basically any character who isnāt already dead by the end.
YES! Anyone who says happy endings are bad will be smothered in puppies! I love a good bittersweet ending, but happy endings have their place and I love them!
And you know what’s especially fun about writing a series? You get to traumatize your characters, have them slowly recover, then traumatize them again, but worse!! Isn’t that brilliant!? XD
LOL, I’ve actually thought about having a weird amnesia kinda thing where Liorah briefly leaves the castle, then comes back, after the events of book 1, with no memories of the earlier events in the castle. *Evil writer laughter* The only issue, I couldn’t pull it off because it would spoil everything that happens in book 1. The drama though… XD
O my gosh ur right, I never actually realised that before. Lorcan has a very strong personality, I donāt think that was even deliberate. I just wanted to have fun with him.
I have the same thing with Liorah! She just kinda… appeared, exactly the way she is. I think my thought process was something like “How do I make a character that’s my exact opposite?” XD It’s weird that she’s so easy to write, actually, we’re not alike at all XD
Heās probably the way he is because heās an unfavourable child of a great lord, so he was constantly pushed to prove himself and learn the arts of war and killing. So he feels the need to be stronger, faster, smarter and better than anyone in literally every way. Physically heās the strongest character in the story. But he also doesnāt see himself as worthy, so he struggles to see himself in a good light. Where he comes from, if you have a physical impairment, youāre not worthy of leading and he has a particular impairment which I wonāt reveal yet. So even though heās the strongest man in his tribe, he canāt lead them.
OOh, that makes sense, that’s so cool!! I really like that backstory, it makes sense for him!
PS I just had a crazy idea. Someone should make a tiktok about this character castle XD it would be great fun Iād say bahaha
LOL, that would be hysterical!!
Feel free to post any character art you guys have ā I would love to see it!
Iām not sure how many people in here do art, so I probably missed a bunch of people.Ā Feel free to join in!
Misu looks so sweet and so much like himself! I love it, and I love the colors you used!!
Oooh, @this-is-not-an-alien !!! Please please pretty please I’d love to see some more of Ehud and Rosy sketches! *Puppy eyes*
Man… It’s so long since I drew Liorah! I’ve drawn her unbelievably often but most of the drawings are outdated so kinda bad. And I’ve only drawn Ferran twice and both are bad (because they’re really old XD)
Okay, thingy is jamming so I’ll try in a separate post XD
Oh, Neasa, Lorcan looks awesome in that picture!
Iām hoping to eventually do one of the Shrike with his little magic goose buddy soon
I don’t have words to describe how much I need to see him and his goose buddy. Please, please do it!!! š
Really?Ā Thatās fantastic!Ā Youāll have to wait and see (or would you rather me just go ahead and spill the beans?)
Nono, don’t! I don’t want spoilers XD But if you ever finish the story, I’d love to alpha/beta read/critique!! It sounds so awesome and I love the characters already!
That makes me so happy hearing you say that!Ā Misu is probably one of my top favorite characters, if not my favorite (I think itās a tie between him and the Shrike).Ā I love him for the same reasons.Ā Heās just so kind and gentle, and yet he holds so much power.Ā I think thatās why I love writing from his perspective.Ā Like I enjoy writing the Shrikeās perspective too, but itās just so depressing.Ā Thereās something really fun and calming about writing Misu
Yes, I love that about him too! Misu feels really calm and balanced, and he’s just fun to read!
Itās really funny, especially since Liorah has no problem picking fights with people like Lorcan lol.Ā Liorah is a super fun character!
LOL, yes! I can’t help loving her most, she makes all her stupid decisions with such certainty and enthusiasm XD (And lots of good intentions XD)
What I really loved about her interactions with Misu is that it showed me a side of Liorah you only get glimpses of in canon. She’s a believer, and confronting her with something spiritual directly makes for some interesting interactions since she kinda understands it, or at least knows how it works.
Iāve really enjoyed writing Misuās interactions with her, and I also really liked reading what you wrote about her backstory.Ā I think itās really interesting when thereās a direct correlation between a characterās experiences and their personality and the decisions they make, because thatās exactly how it works in the real world.
Thank you! It’s very hard to present that accurately here since I can’t really confront her with it directly. But I do my best XD
Also, I feel like I was kinda unfair to my poor Gav in that original post. XD It’s really not his fault, and he’s actually really sweet. Probably the nicest character in all the books, he’s just awesome and I love him <3
Ā Iām definitely looking forward to seeing more of her interactions with Misu and the rest of the group!
…. I was actually planning to pull her and Ferran out after the battle š BUT! I’ll be putting in Sahar and Acyn, who make up the three-man-best friend group of the series with Liorah. You’ll love them too, they’re fantastic! (I need to see Acyn and Misu interact!!)
I can’t leave them in with Liorah though, for safety reasons. XD The three share a brain cell and play rock-paper-scissors each time they need to use it. (I’m convinced Liorah cheats) Ferran is very tired of trying to keep them alive, and Gavril has given up entirely. XD
(I can’t describe how I’m looking forward to dropping them in. Actually, I might do that in one of the next posts, mid-battle. That’ll be hysterical XD I can practically hear Acyn whining already XD)












