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@bclarke

I had a feeling Isa was older than Faye. Sometimes birth order doesn’t need to be specifically introduced (or at least not all at once). And I wasn’t sure what had been introduced in an earlier scene (if Isa is in the previous scene, then it all makes sense).

You’re totally right. I can’t quite remember how clear I was about it, (I wrote it a long time ago) and I do need to go back and check.

Ah ~ nice. Starting to get that at the end when she goes off to check their cow.

Exactly! In fact, I’m not exaggerating if I say that that cow is the catalyst for the entire plot XD