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@bclarke

Hi Bronte! Thanks for listening and thanks for your feedback, it really helps!

Oh, man, I didn’t realize how vague I was. I didn’t indicate their birth order at all *Facepalm*

In hindsight, this scene would have worked way better if I recorded Faye’s introduction chapter first. It’s also where Isa is introduced. Oh, well.

Faye? I get the feeling she is an older sibling… I am eldest of 5, so yeah, I can relate to bunch of kids coming in all wanting to steal the spotlight.

Isa is actually the oldest. The birth order is Isa, Raisa, Juni, Faye, Sage and Lev, and Yoni is the youngest. So Faye is right in the middle, but she’s very shy, especially at the start of the book, so I think that’s why she reads as older. And yes, she does tend to disappear, especially amongst her more extroverted siblings *Cough* Juni *cough* XD

Both interactions were very realistic in a family setting, lol. Nostalgia feels to when I was living with my siblings & parents.

LOL, those interactions were totally not drawn from real life. Never! XD

I want to know where Faye fits in the family (but that may be in other scenes, which probs works fine~)

Was Isa already in the house with Faye?

You’re absolutely right, I do think I should have cleared that up.

Yes, she was. I explained that more in a previous chapter. (Again, this scene would have worked better in order.)

Thank you again! The critique helped a lot! <3