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@obrian-of-the-surface-world
Yes I keep meaning to write the answers to those scene questions, I’ve just managed to juggle way too many projects all at once yet again at twenty of the balls have fallen over two jugglers died and my imaginary friend is running with scissors again 😉
But I loved listening to it while I was working, (can’t wait to see what happens to that stone…). I meant to ask, is this the same story as the excerpt in Controversial Themes? And if so, that wretched villain there is his son the main character? (Or am I drawing inferences from completely unrelated details, which I have been known to do before XD)
I did see the shift in voice with the increase in dialogue and interaction too and it’s very suspenseful especially for a prologue!
Oh laptop! *siiigh* no. I of course don’t know as much about laptops as my parents and that one didn’t actually meet my needs. Apparently what I should look for is a 8 gp i5 something-or-what not refurbished (thank Goodness for Amazon search filters!). So the search continues lol!

@sparrowhawke
Lol he is entertainingly sarcastic! (and I never know what’s going on in my story during the first draft either XD). XD XD I probably just thought he was traumatized because I was just studying PTSD/C-PTSD for my MC and he had a lot of the symptoms…
I love your storyboard! It channels a lot of dark vibes with sarcasm which is always a fun mix XD.