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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 4 months ago
Hi Cathy,
I did post the Scene 2 follow-up to the first scene you reviewed. Just curious what you thought about it.
Were you able to get a new laptop?I like the idea of implementing the passive and active voices like that, that should be really fun to see especially tied to the character arc!I tend to label each scene with a title, so this one is called “A Meeting of Monsters” and I believe you will hear more of an active voice as well as me “altering my voice” to that of…well, you’ll see. 😉
Cheers!












