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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 9 months ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    ( *But there’s no candy left cos Ehud ate it all and is now sugar high leaving Rosario to smirk at the chaos ensuing.* )

    That’s hilarious!! XD

    That means a lot to me that I can work a shipable couple and I’m enjoying it so much!
    Btw, Liorah’s fear is sooo identifiable! It’s really good!

    Thank you so much! (I was afraid her dream came out kind of weird XD) I wasn’t sure how to portray her fear of inadequacy and fear of rejection, but I think that did it pretty well! Another interesting detail that didn’t translate well into text was that Gavril was actually the only one who could see her. She was invisible to everyone else. This was because she’s always felt as though Gavril is the only one who sees her as she is. Which is why it was so upsetting when he turned against her. Poor Liorah, I feel kind of bad for her.

    Liorah: *hisses* Liar! I know you’re enjoying this.

    “Yeah yeah, En boca cerrada no entran moscas,”

    It’s so cool that you have Rosario speak Spanish (I think?) That’s a really cool detail! Do you speak it?

    Five minutes into this he was drawing an I–<3–Rosar-

    Eyes completely glazed over his stumbled over compliantly and dropped his glowing pony out of the way enough Rosario wouldn’t see him tenitively touch his forehead, even though it was a familiar sort’ve sibling gesture for as long as he remembered.

    Both of these made me squeal happily! They’re so CUTEE!!! I’m shipping them more with every passing post!

    *me: …Well that was better than facing your dystopia thingy again, right?
    Ehud–sobbing hysterically–
    Me: …
    Me:–shouldn’t edit out. Stay strong.–
    Ehud–wraps arms around me and sobs into my shoulder–
    Me: …
    Me: That’s it! No more worst fears for Ehud, I don’t wanna be that writer anymore!*

    Aww!! NoooOO! Ehud doesn’t deserve worst fears! He deserves all the ice cream and hugs! Unlike Liorah, she deserves a nightmare now and then for being sassy.

    Liorah: *Takes off one of her boots and hurls it at me*

    *Dodges the boot* See!? My entire relationship with Liorah is summarized in “You can’t do that!” “I do whatever I want and you can’t stop me!”

    Liorah: *Grins smugly* You know it. It’s my story after all.

    @jasmine

    Me: so what do you think?

    Gwendolyn: I hate you.

    Me: *shrugs* I know.

    XD I love it when characters break the fourth wall! It’s always funny!

    I love Gwen’s’ worst fear! It was fascinating! I’m curious who the girl with the blue eyes and light hair was! I’m sure that’s a part of the story though 😉 It’s a really cool fear! It shows that she doesn’t trust herself to be brave, I think? That’s an awesome idea!

    Oh my goodness! that was SO funny! I love seeing people interact with their character, it’s  always so interesting

    Thank you so much! It’s always fun when Liorah chooses to argue!

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