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@daeus-lamb

First off, both of those blurbs are very cool. 🙂 But personally, I had trouble understanding the rewritten one. It was more vague and mysterious, but I don’t know if it was a good kind of mysterious… As a piece of writing, it was really good. But as a blurb, maybe it is too vague. I thought the first one did a better job of giving me a feel for what the book was about and why I should care. Honestly, it made me want to read the book more than the rewritten one did.