Activity

@zee

Thank you for your answer! I found it really helpful and clarifying.

It’s a fairly minor subplot, as the main plot is revolutions and treason. However, it needs to happen before the end due to PlotReasons, in the current draft I think it’s about 2/3rds of the way through and it sets in motion the final act. So I like your suggestion of ending an important chapter with a “curtain drops” type of scene, in the current draft is completely overlooked, which probably has a lot to do with the haze of NaNoWriMo writing i was in at the time 😛

Thanks again for so much help! It definitely gave me a more solid approach to take.