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I don’t know if you’re still looking for feedback on this or not, but just in case you are:

I thought this was really good! The main suggestion I have is that in the very first line, “was and am isn’t” really tripped me up. I understand now what you’re saying, but it took me two or three glances to piece it together.

My favorite line was “I wouldn’t give up on monsters/Not even myself.” That really made me think of Kalmar from the Wingfeather Saga, which is one of my favorite ever series.

I really resonated with this poem. I love its honesty!