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@corkybookworm That’s a lot of input…thank you! 🙂 A lot the things you commented on will make probably make more sense if you know that this was a 4-page assignment for Mythology class in college, and my professor only let me have 8 pages because I wheedled and cajoled, and she knew I would write it well enough that grading 8 of my pages wouldn’t be torture. XD So I wrote this in a couple of weeks and had to pull it in as tight as I could…hence the quick transitions in some places.

@nuetrobolt Thank you! 🙂