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character development

I’ll tag you to a character building game on here.

It’s helped me with learning about and rounding some of my characters.

Would you be interested in giving me a more in-depth critique of the whole thing as I go along?

Interested, yes, very. (But I’m not sure you want me to do it.)

Disclaimer: I’m not sure if I’d be a very consistent helper right now. School’s about to start, and I’m trying to finish my math from last year before chemistry starts in a few weeks. And then when school actually starts? It will probably be a crazy first several weeks…

I will not be offended if you ask someone else.

I’d prefer to send it to you in installments via email, rather than sharing the whole story on this forum. Would that work for you?

I’m not sure. I don’t think my parents would want me to put my email on here. But I have an idea. I will expound in a bit. (: (I get what you mean about not wanting to put your whole book on here.)

And if you’ve got a work that you’d like similar help on, I’d be happy to oblige.

I have someone reading my closest W.I.P. for historical accuracy. But I’d love for you to read it and give me your thoughts. (: I’ve been posting chapters on here for a while. I can go back and tag you there as well. Thanks for offering!