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(so my big comment was deleted unwillingly …. so this is take two and i am going to write small … cause who likes writing the same thing a second time )

so here is what i said

we shouldnt go with dad- son or anything like typical two person drama .its a cliche  ( i dont get emotional for that ) what i get emotion is to something like brothers in arms ,like newly met friends with families at war and one dies off ,definitely emotional (although its a cliche and over used in games )

when we need to think out of the box when a topic is given ,then we keep the topic out of the box ….. lets think of death from a different point of view ( family or friends dying alone is not death , war is also death ….) like death of the soul or death of kindness or death of mind ( zombies ) . many of you here are thinking about friends or family dying when it come to death , then other guild will also think of the same thing . we should try something different

i liked the wifi idea but it will not be emotional ,but funny .

now we must choose , whether the death should be emotional or we should take a complete different direction on the topic like the wifi ( cause iam pretty sure when it comes to death everyone will think of a emotional one but never the funny one )

so once we decide which take we should take ,then we could come up with ideas regarding to that … but definitely a  different take on the topic will be cool ….

i have some different take ideas  .

“what if some cant die but wants to die ..( like a soul or something )”

“can the immortals like devil and angel die … ( we can develop it into a casual funny story)”

“what will happen if god and devil dies leaving humans alone …..”

so those are the different takes … ill come up with more ideas … but if you want to go with the typical emotional idea then i have some ideas for that tooo

” war between human ,aliens and A.I s ….. we tell the story from three persons from different fractions like what they are fighting for , why and what did they lose … finally they three meet with their gun aiming at each other , what will happen .”

 

so i write thriller and suspense . what i usually do is write the story linearly then try to hide the plot and the idea , the reveal it with a twist , example :

take ‘ the A stealing an apple, that apple is an hologram’ that’s linear , simple story . now try to hide it . “i stole an apple , this is considered to be the most valuable one , i want to taste it ….. i dont care about selling it . *A takes a bit * * his teeth goes inside the apple * i cant understand , why cant i eat it … is this a hologram . nooooooo…. *wakes up * phew its a dream . *opens the bag and takes the ….. apple * thank god , i didnt actually try to eat this hologram .”

so this is how i basically write thriller story ( my secret is out ) , i think this is similar to show and not tell (am i right ) …. so first write the story , then we can make it into a thriller and suspense  .

can anyone tell me when is the deadline ? cause we should make a timetable  ( a will to do what the enemy cant do :P)