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writergirl101 replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Hey Caroline! I did some suggestions on your document–mostly punctuation and highlighting. I did do some sentence rewriting, but if you find that they’re not your style, or straying from your original text, or you just don’t like them, then don’t bother about changing stuff. 😊 My documents look terrible after I’ve edited the first draft!!😂 Your story is great–keep writing so I can read the next one!
-Ella
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