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Okay so here is the revised version! Not going to post the whole thing again, just what’s different!

To his right were halls leading to who knows where. He saw two tall people standing in the middle of one of the halls and gasped.

Suddenly a girl coming around one of the corners bumped into them. Blushing she took a step backwards “I beg your pardon,” she said.

He turned around and jerking open the door he had come from hid inside.

He didn’t know why he responded that way and chided himself for being silly.

Wow, Jaylin, way to make a good first impression. Running away like that! Hopefully, they didn’t notice me!

He took a deep breath and smoothed his hair. Plastering a smile on his face he stepped into the hall and advanced towards the group.