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  • Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Short Story Critique in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 1 month ago

    @eitan Thank you for your comments! The storyline is kind of based off a song, and when I hear it, that’s what I thought too.

    Yeah, I should definitely fix the ages at the beginning. Thanks for pointing that out.

    As a matter of fact, I am Chinese. 🙂

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