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  • Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago

    Here’s my character! Tell me what you think!

    Meet Jaylin…..

     

    Jaylin looked around,

    Where am I?

    The room was scarce of furniture, save for a dresser with a mirror and the bed he was laying on. A turquoise door stood across from him, reminding him of the ocean. There was a mysterious aura about it, daring him to open it.

    He stood up shedding the bedclothes and walked slowly towards the door.

    Earlier he had fallen asleep in his house, but now waking up he realized he was no longer in his house nor anywhere else he recognized.

    He grabbed the door handle and pulled…

    What he saw amazed him. Rows upon rows of doors stretched out before him. He turned in a slow circle trying to take it all in.

    To his left was an old green door, but it quickly lost his attention.

    To his right were halls leading to who knows where. He saw someone standing in the middle of one of the halls and he gasped. Turning around he jerked open the door he had come from and hid inside.

    He didn’t know why he responded that way and chided himself for being silly.

    Wow Jaylin, way to make a good first impression. Running away like that!

    He took a deep breath and smoothed his hair. Plastering a smile on his face he stepped into the hall, and almost jumped out of his skin when he saw that the person had advanced forward and now stood there looking at him.

    It was a girl.

    He groaned inside, I hate girls!

    She looked to be about 17 but he wasn’t very good at guessing ages. She had wavy black hair reaching her shoulders and green eyes.

    He laughed “You scared me!”

     

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