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I like your latest version. It’s very specific and has a clear mood.

Complication: it is very dark and heavy. And I would say if it doesn’t match the mood of your story, then you should rewrite it. And I feel that strongly. Don’t use it if it doesn’t fit.

The only other thing I would say is, you seem to be stuck in the “eternal rewrite” phase. The past few synopses that you’ve presented us with have been fine. In my opinion, you should just pick your favorite bits of the last three or four versions and rewrite it one last time. Just my opinion.

You’re making good progress!