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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic The Songkiller’s Synopsis!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@daeus-lamb I hate the second one, sorry =P I feel like all the genericness you previously addressed was put back in.
I like the first one quite a lot, though. I’m not sure what “it’s part of their brokenness” means, and ‘The song sages call the Songkiller’s symphony” reads a little confusing as it sounds to me on first go like you begin talking about “the song sages,” but otherwise I feel like it’s a little more evocative of your personal style than previous blurbs you’ve posted have been.












