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@quinn-ofallon I just read the first chapter! It’s a good beginning to the story. Right off you have me intrigued about the Moonwatchers and the heretics. Roshni is a strong, well-developed character. I noticed a few small typos, but that’s about all. Your writing style is good and I am impressed by the worldbuilding. Additionally, the use of first person POV combined with present tense is very unique. Great job! I’ll definitely be reading more of this story. 🙂