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Tinuviel replied to the topic Critique A Story in the forum Critiques 6 years, 6 months ago
@princess-foo Thank you so much! Your feedback was super helpful! That’s also interesting that you linked it to poetry…I can’t write poetry worth a lick, but I do like it and tend to read quite a bit of it. All your suggestions made a lot of sense and a lot of them are things I can implement. Thanks for taking the time to read it 🙂










