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@ericawordsmith

Life is like a river. You sweep into a pool that you stay in for a time then are washed away again.

Thank you! Yea, me too! My family loves going to the beach; Fort Bragg on the Pacific coast. We do the same things every time. We just love it.

A funny tale: this year before I went to the beach, I said that I was going to write at least five poems on or about the ocean and its many sands. Guess what? I wrote them all before (this one above being one of them) then when I got there, I sat back and relaxed. I think I only wrote about four lines. XD

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Hey, all I expect when I say something about critique is either your general thoughts, or/and deeper critiques. So y’all did fine! Thanks for commenting! 🙂

Thanks!