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Candide replied to the topic Azeline's Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
Hello, Digital Daze
About “To Those Who Want But never Give”, I would like to say that the topic is very good!. The beginig with tree verses with the same structure works very well. I just would try to write with less rimes in the second part of the poem (in the first part there was live/desire well done).
About ““Self-consciousness” I would not change anything.
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