Activity

@j-a-penrose I tried my hand at writing it. I really would love to have everyone in there and commenting on it, though. 🙂 I went with the stuff we’d been talking about and just sort of wrote it, but I think that there’s something very big about it that we should change.

The whole prompt is about something beautiful in a dramatic setting. I spent most of the writing making it dramatic. Only at the end did I talk about making something beautiful. I tried to thread it a little and keep the reader’s mind on the hands a bit, but I do think that there should be a longer section for it. If we’re going to win, then we need a good section with something to do with the prompt. 😉

Maybe we could do a flashback or something? I think that would be the most effective in making it longer, but I don’t think I can write it. Does anyone else want to give it a go? 😊