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@blueberry Thank you! I’m probably going to continue bugging you about it =P

@coggleton Thanks for reading as far as you have! And thanks for the critique, though I’m not at a point where I’m continuing to edit the story details, and am on to the second book. I know the first one has flaws (and sometimes major ones), and I’ve spent too much time already trying to iron out what I can without radically changing the whole thing many people have already read, and instead trying to make the next part of it a proper story from the beginning.

Definitely not going in the direction of “Dan the charismatic leader everyone follows,” but I can imagine an alternate story where that could be funny.

That said, I’ve updated the folder with versions of the documents that fix some little single-line plot holes and a couple more typos =P