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@valtmy Thank you so much for your suggestions!  I really, really like your second idea.

I’m sorry, but I don’t think Kashti’s personality fits with the first idea of your “favorite antagonist.”  But I do find that characterization interesting too, so maybe I’ll use it someday. 😉

The second idea, about the traitor causing some injustice to Kashti before the main betrayal, is perfect though.  I’m almost certain I’ll end up using that.  It actually solves several other problems I had with the plot besides just Kashti’s personality problem, so that’s wonderful.

Thanks again for your help!!