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Okay hi, yes, you don’t know me, but WOW ZIKERS I AM IN AWE, KIDDO

1. Not very bad at all. You have actual real talent, no joke, really and truly.

2. Yes yes YES. Your descriptions are PERFECT. As someone who struggles at description in particular, I can’t get over how well you executed it. Your dialogue feels totally natural too.

3. You’re doing great so far, but if I had to say something, maybe use slightly less adjectives? Again, you seem to be pretty epic at description, but slightly less adjectives might make it a bit easier to get into the flow of the sentences.

4. Glaring weakness? What? I see none whatsoever.

(Also sorry, you don’t know me, don’t feel creeped out I was called in here by a friend)