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theinconceivable1 replied to the topic DESPERATE 4 CRITIQUE in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@the-fledgling-artist: YOUR BACK!!! How was bible school?!?!
1. Uh, not bad, like, at all! I’m a harsh critic and this is good, maybe even really good! : D You are very, very far from bad XD
2. Yes XD
3. Uh, I honestly don’t know XD I mean, the context is vague, I don’t know who Vyn is, why their hear why she feels she has to stay ect… and I don’t think you really claified that, like, at all. But the writing and prose itself, really good! : D
4. Like I said, IDK XD Really good job! (I had no clue you could write like that!)












