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@the-fledgling-artist oh lawd xD that is not my strong suit admittedly, but since it’s so important to get critique as an artist I would be more than willing to do it for you!!

BUT just as a disclaimer, I always feel like it sounds like I’m coming off like I know more about art than the person I’m critiquing, which is not true at all x’D Just cause I’m critiquing doesn’t mean I don’t have respect for the receivers of said critique as artists and people 👌🏻

1. Is she running from something scary? If so, I feel like her expression should be different—more panicked, wider eyes, no smile— as well as her body posture. If she was running full tilt, it might look more… stretched?? Idk what that term would be XDD As it is right now, it looks like she’s jogging.

2. I’m assuming those tendrils of white is wind? If so, maybe make them more elongated, and not coming from the same source. Instead of stemming from one certain spot, maybe have it coming from the same general direction instead?

blurp I think that’s it x’D