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duskflower replied to the topic Grab Your Knapsacks and to Arms! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
I’m so excited to see Knaphollow rise up and go to war! So proud of you guys and excited to see what we’ll accomplish together!
I have a few ideas:
I’m always down for a good animal POV, but the ending itself seems too predictable. Maybe, to twist it a bit, the animal doesn’t return home, but realizes that the world outside is more beautiful than it ever imagined? Or that it wasn’t meant to stay in that comfort and shelter anymore? Kind of a coming-of-age thing, but that might be too long.
– With the villain idea, maybe we could have a protagonist that’s on a crossroads and leaning towards a darker option? They might be experiencing great hardship, and to be a villain is the easier route for them. But, in the end, they must choose the harder path and face the consequences – but know that no matter what happens to them, they chose the right way.
– My favorite idea so far brought up is @samantha-pen‘s mention of a content to struggle type ending. It seems like something that could really be deeply meaningful without much exposition, fit well within the space we’re allowed and really embody the non-cliched happy ending in that it’s deeply joyful but also deeply wrapped up in very real sorrow and pain. Maybe it could be someone going through a really dark season and is deeply despairing and close to wanting to just give up. They’re in the darkest of nights, but for a moment they catch sight of the coming dawn and make the choice to endure. There is a whispering in the wind of a time when all will be made right, when death will be overthrown, when tears will only become a memory. There is hope of the sun bursting forth into glorious day. And so they will endure. The ending would have pain and sadness and weakness but creeping hope and a newfound, stubborn joy. It could definitely be allegorical. A lot of times stories forget about suffering in anticipation and, especially given our length constraints, it might be nice to just focus on that. We can only tell just a chapter of a larger story, after all, and this is a chapter that is also the chapter every believer on Earth is in right now. For now, our joy is intertwined with sorrow and deep, aching longing and the culmination of our hope has yet to come to pass. And still we hope, and we rejoice in it.












